In this article I was checking over the spelling and grammar/AP Style and I noticed a few errors. Where it says “exact same’ that is too wordy and you can simply say “the same”. Another is when listing off the makeup, eyeshadow is not plural. Also near the end you have misspelled the word ColourPop by missing an r. There are many examples of hidden verbs that could be change and simplified. The word naive needs to have the correct accent on it. The last two words are redundant and can be fixed to make it easier to read.
This was for a homework assignment so don’t take it personal lmao
In this article I was checking over the spelling and grammar/AP Style and I noticed a few errors. Where it says “exact same’ that is too wordy and you can simply say “the same”. Another is when listing off the makeup, eyeshadow is not plural. Also near the end you have misspelled the word ColourPop by missing an r. There are many examples of hidden verbs that could be change and simplified. The word naive needs to have the correct accent on it. The last two words are redundant and can be fixed to make it easier to read.